ווילט איר קענען א געשליפענע ענגליש? קומט אריין!

[טמיר]

I think it would be a great idea to start an eshkol to write in English-language. This would be helpful for people like me that are not best in English, to be able to enhance their knowledge and fluency in this language.
As we all know, the best way to learn anything is thru practice. But the problem is that you need someone to correct you, so this where this eshkol is here to help. The participants of this eshkol will be able to post comments about anything, and others who see something that needs correction will be so kind to do it - preferably inline - and help others enhance their English.
The corrections can be in every aspect, such in spelling, grammar, or just to replace a word with a more appropriate one.
Luckily, in our smartphone era, there is almost no need for the first kind of corrections, since everyone can check the spelling on their phones. So the corrections can be on the other two aspects.
I want to BEG ALL PARTICIPANTS, PLEASE write only interesting and meaningful posts, it should be attractive to read. Thank you!
So let's get started!

[קל וחומר]

[left]Nice idea!

I'm afraid this eshkol will pretty soon get into the א שמייכל category...

Sent from my LG-LS980 using Tapatalk[/left]

[שלום על ישראל]

[left]Considering that this will serve as a playground, I'd propose firstly that the posts should be relatively short, a maximum of three paragraphs. This will make it more readable.

Also, I'd suggest that the critiques should keep the writer's feelings in mind, and the writers should not take the critic personally.

Please keep your text left-aligned. Let's go.[/left]

[berlbalaguleh]

Mr. Tamir. your idea is a wonderful and useful one.
In spite of the fact that your essay in the English language leaves something to be desired. Your Spelling, however, is flawless. You might perhaps have made use of the Spell Check program. But that is to be complimented. It reflects your strong desire to achieve a high standard of expressing yourself in the English language!

p.s.: For a translation and meaning of the above scribbles in the Hungarian vernacular. Please contact Holczler Translations in New Square, Rockland County. (Or, as it's alternately known as Jewland.)

[berlbalaguleh]

טמיר: ולכל מאן דבעי למידע. דיין איידיע איז וואונדערבאר און אויסגעצייכנט. ס'איז נאר דא איין פראבלעם. איך האלט אז ס'איז קעגן די הייליגע מיהאלאוויצער תקנות...ולא יתערב זר במלאכתנו...הגם ר' סענדער דער דייטש זכותו יגון (ואנחה) עלינו האט געשריבן בלשון עבר. אז ער דאנקט דעם הייליגן באשעפער אז דער קאמפאט מיט די טשיקן און פאטעיטא קוגל ביי אונז איז זייער גוט געווען. ..."ולא נתערב זר במלאכתנו"...!
און דער עולם איז זיך צוגאנגען אין די פריע פארטאגס שעה'ן מיט געהויבענע געפיהלן פון התרוממות דקדושה...!

[ליטוואק פון בודאפעסט]

Reb Berel, your English is fine, but your grammar is something of a disaster. It is hard for me to quote and correct from my cellphone, but an idea would be to cut and paste your text into MS Word and allow the grammar check to do its job.

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[קאווע טרינקער]

I think it would be a great idea to start an eshkol to write in English-language. This would be helpful for people like me that are not best in English, to be able to enhance their knowledge and fluency in this language.
As we all know, the best way to learn anything is thru practice. But the problem is that you need someone to correct you, so this where this eshkol is here to help. The participants of this eshkol will be able to post comments about anything, and others who see something that needs correction will be so kind to do it - preferably inline - and help others enhance their English.
The corrections can be in every aspect, such in spelling, grammar, or just to replace a word with a more appropriate one.
Luckily, in our smartphone era, there is almost no need for the first kind of corrections, since everyone can check the spelling on their phones. So the corrections can be on the other two aspects.
I want to BEG ALL PARTICIPANTS, PLEASE write only interesting and meaningful posts, it should be attractive to read. Thank you!
So let's get started!

[left]Dear Hidden
Your idea requires an English friendly environment , the platform this forum is build with is not so. Hence the troubled correspondence and conversation.
The bold letters in quote above, are my comments.
The first 2 indicate the grammar , which is translation from Yiddish,

thru - is not so professional , rather use the full spelling - through

I would write: "will be kind to do so" - the word" "it" is childish[/left]

[הוגה]

[left]Considering that this will serve as a playground, I'd propose firstly that the posts should be relatively short, a maximum of three paragraphs. This will make it more readable.

Also, I'd suggest that the critiques should keep the writer's feelings in mind, and the writers should not take the critic personally.

Please keep your text left-aligned. Let's go.[/left]

I think that "critics" is the correct word there. "Critique" are the comments and advice that "critics" give.


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[פרייוויליג]

If im not mistaken, there are several English threads out there

[berlbalaguleh]

Reb Berel, your English is fine, but your grammar is something of a disaster. It is hard for me to quote and correct from my cellphone, but an idea would be to cut and paste your text into MS Word and allow the grammar check to do its job.

Sent from my HTC Desire 510 using Tapatalk

Reb LFFB. My English Grammar stands approximately 45 degrees higher than your Yiddish syntax. Which, BTW is beyond disastrous.
I could cite examples galore. But I'm not about to offer you lessons in Yiddish Grammar gratis...

[שבת אחים]

ר׳ בערל אויב איך מעג פרעגן פון ווי קענט איר אזא גיטע ענגליש פון אורגוויי? א רבי ז״ל איד א סאטמאר/פאפא תלמיד זאל קענען אזא גיטע ענגליש? ס׳איז א חידוש בימינו!

[berlbalaguleh]

ר׳ בערל אויב איך מעג פרעגן פון ווי קענט איר אזא גיטע ענגליש פון אורגוויי? א רבי ז״ל איד א סאטמאר/פאפא תלמיד זאל קענען אזא גיטע ענגליש? ס׳איז א חידוש בימינו!

ר' שבת אחים: ווען איך בין געקומען קיין אמעריקע האביך נישט געקענט מער ווי 3 ווערטער ענגליש..."פליעס. טהענק יו. און הארס. דאס האביך אייביג געוואוסט מיינט ...א פערד...
איך האב פשוט אנגעהויבן ליינען ענגליש. מיט א ..."וועבסטער", (אנ)-אברידזש'ד דיקשאנערי ביי די זייט.
לגבי די רעבעזכיסעיאגן אלייינע'שאפט. איך בין דער ערשטער, און אפשר איינציגסטער, סאקמערע ציוני וואס איך קען...
אויב ס'איז דא נאך איינער, זאלל ער זיך ביטע אנרופן. וכל הקודם זכה...כלשון הרב סענדער דער דייטש זכותו יגון עלינו.....

[שבת אחים]

איך בין זיכער ס׳איז דא נאך סאטמארע ציונים. Any way lets get back to the original topic of this Eshkol
Some how יעדע צווייטע אשכול אין קאווע שטיבל ענדיגט זיך מיט סענדער דער דויטש!

[berlbalaguleh]

איך בין זיכער ס׳איז דא נאך סאטמארע ציונים. Any way lets get back to the original topic of this Eshkol
Some how יעדע צווייטע אשכול אין קאווע שטיבל ענדיגט זיך מיט סענדער דער דויטש!

שבת אחים: ווייל איך בין איהם שולדיג א סאך געלט. א יעדע וואך ווען כ'האב געליינט דעם איד האט עס מיר ארויפגעטריבן מיין בלאד פרעשור. און כ'האב נישט געדארפט נוצן מיין מעדיקעיד קארד צו גיין אין אפטייק קויפן מעדיצין...
ואני את שלי אמרתי...יעצט צוריק צום סאבדזשעקט. ייש"כ...!

[פידלער]

[left]Considering that this will serve as a playground, I'd propose firstly that the posts should be relatively short, a maximum of three paragraphs. This will make it more readable.

Also, I'd suggest that the critiques should keep the writer's feelings in mind, and the writers should not take the critic personally.

Please keep your text left-aligned. Let's go.[/left]

[left]Nice! But you meant to say, "the writers should not take the criticism (or critique) personally." In Yiddish the word is pronounced *critic*, which makes this a bit confusing[/left]

[[NAMELESS]]

[left]I think it'll also be a good idea to quote some statements and/or paragraphs from published stuff, like heimishe journalists etc. And we'll discuss their grammar & vocabulary.[/left]

[רויטע וואנצעס]

my grommer and zpeeling zucks so dab, im not evening tryoing

hav a lice day

[קל וחומר]

my grommer and zpeeling zucks so dab, im not evening tryoing

hav a lice day

Yoo two!

[רויטע וואנצעס]

i do know some words:

vindow
voki toki
kar vash
viliamsbug
vilson street
vun tow tri
mediקעיד

[שלום על ישראל]

my grommer and zpeeling zucks so dab, im not evening tryoing

hav a lice day

[left]How did you overcome your spell-checker? You must have tried this over and over until it gave up[/left]

[שלום על ישראל]

i do know some words:

vindow

ווינדא איז אידיש; Fansture איז ענגליש

[וואלווי]

[left]I think it'll also be a good idea to quote some statements and/or paragraphs from published stuff, like heimishe journalists etc. And we'll discuss their grammar & vocabulary.[/left]

I think it would also be a good idea to quote some phrases or sentences and/or paragraphs from published material or articles, like from heimishe journalists etc. And then we'll discuss their grammar & vocabulary.

comments:

1) It would - The word will is used when something is certain as in I will go or it will be great, as opposed to the word would is used with a suggestion such as it would be a good idea.
2) Phrases or sentences – statements does not pair with the word paragraph, it works well with the word group of question, answer etc. which represents the tone or intention of the spoken words. Whereas the words phrases or sentences are consistent with the word paragraph which all represent grammatical terminology.
3) Published material or articles – the word stuff is relevant to physical items and word material is used with publishing or journalism.
4) From and then – Watch the flow. Add the right words to make the reading easier so to let the words flow.

Tip: Besides for spell check it’s very good to use the thesaurus.